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Far away, just outside the Dens, the wolves were preparing for their long march to the Vampire Realm. They were in six huge columns, each column numbering roughly 3000, each was commanded by one of the six Omegas, who marched 10 paces in front of the column. They were all lined up and ready to march for a full week, to reach the Palace City before sundown on the 7th day. Orders were being shouted along the columns. They were separated into groups of two, Darang and Teyler would we attacking the western gate, Gaylen and Zin would attack the eastern gate, Wendon and Rolind would attack the southern gate. Balinst, in full wolf form, gazed out at the columns from a small cliff overlooking the entrance to the dens. He was accompanied by five members of his special elite force. He scanned the columns a little longer then let out a deafening roar, one so loud it shook loose large rocks from the cliff. He raised a claw to the sky and the whole Wolf Legion returned his roar. They began marching off, towards battle, towards death. They knew that a lot of them probably wouldn’t make it back, but each knew he wouldn’t die alone. They were tired and hungry, but the battle lust burning in their hearts kept them marching.
©2007-2009 ~NeiftheGreen
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This is the second Exerpt from my NaNoWriMo 2006. It's not that good, but it's more reflective of the piece as a whole than my last one. I used a generic Werewolf vs. Vampire theme for the novel, since it was my first one. Next time I hope to write something worth any account.

Also I hope to one day go through my WinAmp Playlist and get rid of all the Emo music on it heh.

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You have very good imagery in your writing! :clap: Was this your 1st novel? Or have you written others before this one? And the whole vampire and werewolf thing is in nowadays anyway, so I'm sure people wouldn't be criticizing you on it! :)

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Seems a bit cliche` to me. 'Cause Vampires have been fighting Werewolves for a REALLY long time.

This was my first NaNoWriMo, I finished on the 29th of November. I only did it to help a friend, she didn't want to write alone, so I wrote one.

I got the imspiration from a book I read, By These Ten Bones by Clare B. Dunkle, she did the Hollow Kingdom trilogy if you're familiar with that.

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Well, I guess that's true. I'm still looking for a novel that the 2 are in league with each other! :XD: But until then, I'll just have to be happy with what I find! ;)

I've never heard of NaNoWriMo before.....sounds interesting! But I probably wouldn't be able to do that. I'm horrible with actually finishing stories. I'll just stick to poetry! ;) LoL.

I don't think I've ever heard of either of those books.....hmm.... :confused: ......I'll have to look into them. :D

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